Monday, January 23, 2012
Robertson
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Slow down. Every word in accent.
Great Irish soft shoe dancer
Work on gestures that seem natural – work in front of mirror.Think about fitting sighs, breaths, hands.
You are the one with the statistics, facts, etc. Be sure to hit those facts.
Slow down. Watch Happy Feet
DO NOT BACK UP
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Moe
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Pause before 7711 and Herb. Moe, we need to see you as a father to Lee. Trafalgar
Keep accent consistent
Mama
Bars
Remember bar scene
Firmly
Herb
Was
Hands out of pockets
Won’t let him in – more reluctant
I’m employed – more anger
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Lee
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Need to see you as a son to Moe. To the subway tobacco
Smackin homers – use movement Mark suggested. It will make you more childlike
University – live like a king – emphasize.
Dollar
Watch movies with NY accents. Your cadence is off in the show and it sounds Italian.
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Fanny
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Louder. Lower pitch
Take your scenes a little further. Use vocal noises.
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Rosman
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Stay in accent. Wrong anyway. louder
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Sidney/ Toland
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Get to ladder quicker. Country, should
Be louder
Used ta – important words. Hit those.
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Grandpa
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Better accent. Still a little Irish as grandpa
Closet bathroom
Slow down
Get back in the clock – diction
Louder
Make grumpy noises as grandpa
Hit consonants.
Love your old man walk
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Irene
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Keep voice lower – Catholic
Social
Employment
Starving
Accent was great at the beginning. You had a lower pitch. In the welfare office, you had a higher one. LOVED the talking to people in the welfare office. Keep building your character.
Work on brother speech. Stand up and address everyone with the first two lines.
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Quinn
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Louder
Work on dancing Stay in character. Make each character different through mannerisms. WORK ON THIS. Watch Happy Feet
Slow down on facts when explaining about getting the job.
Work on making Quinn and Ryan different.
Read the script on your exit as Quinn. You are responsible to move the black phone from the bar to your “office”
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Rose
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Doris
Don’t cross legs
Wake up, Fanny – slow down. Have attitude.
Every week
Use more people noises. Be more motherly, etc.
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Banks/Clarence
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Give Me
In bar scene – use more gestures.
Roman candles
Bank’s scene, move around trying to find a more comfortable position. Need newspapers. Use gestures.
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Doris
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Good job dancing
Who are you going to take? Use attitude
Better job on accent. Practice looking at people directly in the eyes. Do this all the time, not just on stage so that you become more used to it.
College
My turn goes down.
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Graham, Diana
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Remember bar scene
Louder
Don’t rush
Don’t turn your back to audience
Disheveled and disoriented at the bar.
Pad to write on.
Shake hands as you leave.
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Cody
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Good job with music.
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Women
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Use Mark’s suggestions – more mms, oohs, etc.
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Reporter Graham, Robertson, Quinn
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More reaction and more surprise. More emotions on the resigning lines.
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Dugan and Kapush
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Work on making each character different. Hit consonants.
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Fanny and Moe
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Step on each others’ lines.
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Bar Men
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At the bar, don’t block one another. When you toast - drink
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Lights
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Anticipate where the light needs to be.
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Quinn and Robertson
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Tip your hats to Ms. Graham as she leaves.
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Everyone
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No phones on set. You would not use them during football practice, on the track field, at basketball practice, etc.
Consonants – hit them – all letters except aeiou
More walk in front. Walk faster
DO NOT BACK UP
Mob scene at bank. We need to hear you first. See Lee push through the crowd, then freeze. After his last line, murmur.
Look at your lines – Mark suggested this. We were told with each critique last year to focus on lines with numbers, important facts, etc.
Watch Happy Feet
More reactions in welfare scene. Especially during arguments and reacting to Toland, the cab driver.
At the beginning, don’t clump. Walk on the gray set.
STEP ON LINES.
During the Rosman – Robertson scene. Dancers, step a little SRC and freeze when Robertson and Rosman have their conversation.
Two ladders in the Back – USR – love the silhouettes when you guys are working.
If you have read this, text me who your best friend is and what you like about him/her.
During Lee’s scene on the Mississippi, we need bums sitting DSC
Welfare scene needs people noises.
Dugan and Irene – fantastic job reacting in Welfare office.
Everyone came out too late in the “walk” moving against Robertson.
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cool beans
ReplyDeleteNeed more people noises throughout the show
ReplyDeleteWill Do!
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ReplyDeleteGot newspaper today, for banks would sitting back against the closed bar be better than lying down
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ReplyDeleteK I'll be sure to work on it! Paige
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