Moe
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Trafalgar – accent is on fal and you always forget the last one.
Classy walking stick
Keep accent clear and consistent
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Lee
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I’ll try to find a comic book. How do you change and grow older? What experiences have you had on your journey through the play?
Watch cadence on your accent – too Italian
Beautiful
Apartment
Page 18 of the new script cut the following “We pretended nothing had happened. But something had…. To cheer him up. Go to “I began inventing a fantastic future. I said I’d not only get a job…….
Interrupt Irene’s line”…he better get crackin.”
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Robertson
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SLOW DOWN
Clarence
United States
Conflict
Country
Table
Basement
talk
Keep hands out of pocket
Great facial expressions
Watch happy feet
When music comes on, speak louder
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Fanny
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Love your attitude with Sidney. Find a time to ruffle his hair.
Accent needs to stay consistent
First
Remember scene with Sidney
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Grandpa and others
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Slow down. Your accent has improved so much. So has your movements
Say lines toward audience
Cut Everybody knows Roosevelt is going to win again.
Down
This is weird – beauty backrumps is Irish sounding?!?!!?
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Dr. Rosman
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Watch pouting your lips.
Doing better
Basis
You could be wrong – cut too. Watch going up.
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Edie
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LOUDER – justice
Socialism line out toward the audience
learnin
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Rose
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Great job setting stage up.
Sounded a little British at the beginning, but worked it out.
Cut pickpocket line
After Robertson says, “Yes, but they also believed, you say,”What did they believe? Before Irene’s line.
This little wooden house
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Women
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Step on lines in the last scene in Rose’s kitchen
In this scene, treat Rose as if she is confused, and you women are concerned.
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Clarence, etc.
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Watch back to the audience.
Good people noises
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Irene
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Practice dance
Lower register in voice
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Miss Fowler
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Rehearse the dance.
Talk with Savannah
Have busy work. Careful looking stiff.
Smile
Work on accent.
As Grace, work on accent
Good facial expression.
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Sidney
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Remember scene with Fanny
SLOW DOWN
HIT THIRTEEN
In the Sidney/Doris scene, Doris will have her back to the audience and will write Sidney Simmons Loves Doris SIMMONS so that the audience can see it. When you pick it up, you grimace.
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Quinn
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When dancing, look out at audience & SMILE.
You use the seersucker suit.
As Rian, keep What’re you, a medical doctor, now Irene? In the welfare scene.
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Diana
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Look more disoriented and weak. When Livermore gives you the $, exit with shame. Talk to people going into the bar.
Say the lines more heart felt
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Music and lights
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For Quinn and Robertson’s scene, don’t forget lights and sound.
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Doris
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Lower pitch
In the Sidney/Doris scene, have your back to the audience and write Sidney Simmons Loves Doris SIMMONS so that the audience can see it. When he picks it up, he grimaces.
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Everyone
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Mob people - we need you in the bank scene when Lee breaks through the mob.
Know your entrances and exits
More people noises in welfare room
Walks are good
Ty, Carson, and Lawrence – great in the back
Michelle, Kayla, Allison, Abby – great in back.
Crew - text me your favorite scene.
Actors - Text me what your character is doing before the play starts.
In blogging, do exactly as I ask or it isn't counted.
During Fanny and Sidney scene, we need more people on stage.
In your scripts – scene by scene – mark your dialogue when you change subjects. Make those sentences sound different.
During scene 7, create HOOVERVILLE
When Lee talks about the men walking, we need to see them walking, and we need one man in front of Lee as a bum.
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Needs
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I ordered another baby bottle and a phone
Jared needs another costume
Molly – another costume
Clean drinking glasses
Sidney, Lee, Joey – Paper boy hats
Robertson, Durant, Quinn –fedoras
Mr. Bush – fedora
Work on dance and laughs
Transitions should be faster
Be on stage all of the time.
Barchair on bar with sign.
Savannah clothes
Ryan – no hat in your scene
Fanny clothes
Mackinaw
Poor clothes for Irene
Clothes for Lee in Joey scene.
Pitcher for lemonade
Bracelets
Rags and polish for box
Soft extension cord
Dresses for Hannah and Savannah
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Opening
Sunday, January 29, 2012
Sunday, January 29, 2012
Tuesday, January 24, 2012
Rehearsal January 23
Monday, January 23, 2012
Robertson
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Slow down. Every word in accent.
Great Irish soft shoe dancer
Work on gestures that seem natural – work in front of mirror.Think about fitting sighs, breaths, hands.
You are the one with the statistics, facts, etc. Be sure to hit those facts.
Slow down. Watch Happy Feet
DO NOT BACK UP
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Moe
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Pause before 7711 and Herb. Moe, we need to see you as a father to Lee. Trafalgar
Keep accent consistent
Mama
Bars
Remember bar scene
Firmly
Herb
Was
Hands out of pockets
Won’t let him in – more reluctant
I’m employed – more anger
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Lee
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Need to see you as a son to Moe. To the subway tobacco
Smackin homers – use movement Mark suggested. It will make you more childlike
University – live like a king – emphasize.
Dollar
Watch movies with NY accents. Your cadence is off in the show and it sounds Italian.
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Fanny
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Louder. Lower pitch
Take your scenes a little further. Use vocal noises.
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Rosman
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Stay in accent. Wrong anyway. louder
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Sidney/ Toland
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Get to ladder quicker. Country, should
Be louder
Used ta – important words. Hit those.
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Grandpa
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Better accent. Still a little Irish as grandpa
Closet bathroom
Slow down
Get back in the clock – diction
Louder
Make grumpy noises as grandpa
Hit consonants.
Love your old man walk
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Irene
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Keep voice lower – Catholic
Social
Employment
Starving
Accent was great at the beginning. You had a lower pitch. In the welfare office, you had a higher one. LOVED the talking to people in the welfare office. Keep building your character.
Work on brother speech. Stand up and address everyone with the first two lines.
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Quinn
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Louder
Work on dancing Stay in character. Make each character different through mannerisms. WORK ON THIS. Watch Happy Feet
Slow down on facts when explaining about getting the job.
Work on making Quinn and Ryan different.
Read the script on your exit as Quinn. You are responsible to move the black phone from the bar to your “office”
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Rose
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Doris
Don’t cross legs
Wake up, Fanny – slow down. Have attitude.
Every week
Use more people noises. Be more motherly, etc.
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Banks/Clarence
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Give Me
In bar scene – use more gestures.
Roman candles
Bank’s scene, move around trying to find a more comfortable position. Need newspapers. Use gestures.
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Doris
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Good job dancing
Who are you going to take? Use attitude
Better job on accent. Practice looking at people directly in the eyes. Do this all the time, not just on stage so that you become more used to it.
College
My turn goes down.
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Graham, Diana
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Remember bar scene
Louder
Don’t rush
Don’t turn your back to audience
Disheveled and disoriented at the bar.
Pad to write on.
Shake hands as you leave.
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Cody
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Good job with music.
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Women
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Use Mark’s suggestions – more mms, oohs, etc.
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Reporter Graham, Robertson, Quinn
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More reaction and more surprise. More emotions on the resigning lines.
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Dugan and Kapush
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Work on making each character different. Hit consonants.
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Fanny and Moe
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Step on each others’ lines.
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Bar Men
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At the bar, don’t block one another. When you toast - drink
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Lights
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Anticipate where the light needs to be.
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Quinn and Robertson
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Tip your hats to Ms. Graham as she leaves.
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Everyone
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No phones on set. You would not use them during football practice, on the track field, at basketball practice, etc.
Consonants – hit them – all letters except aeiou
More walk in front. Walk faster
DO NOT BACK UP
Mob scene at bank. We need to hear you first. See Lee push through the crowd, then freeze. After his last line, murmur.
Look at your lines – Mark suggested this. We were told with each critique last year to focus on lines with numbers, important facts, etc.
Watch Happy Feet
More reactions in welfare scene. Especially during arguments and reacting to Toland, the cab driver.
At the beginning, don’t clump. Walk on the gray set.
STEP ON LINES.
During the Rosman – Robertson scene. Dancers, step a little SRC and freeze when Robertson and Rosman have their conversation.
Two ladders in the Back – USR – love the silhouettes when you guys are working.
If you have read this, text me who your best friend is and what you like about him/her.
During Lee’s scene on the Mississippi, we need bums sitting DSC
Welfare scene needs people noises.
Dugan and Irene – fantastic job reacting in Welfare office.
Everyone came out too late in the “walk” moving against Robertson.
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