Thursday, January 12, 2012

Read this carefully.

This is an important critique, so read it carefully.

Quinn	We need to cut your monologue. I will do this by Sunday. Read the blog Friday. To meet ya – not you. Workin Hello Luck Depression What You –ya Meetin Workin Thousand wall
Robertson	Cut your last monologue we read before we finished tonight. Lower your voice! Watch squeaking. Cross as dancers cross to center. Market Warehouse Country Cashing Feel Even Nuts Banks Basement Times Hudson
Rose	Louder Don’t ya
Banks	Show emotion in your voice and expression on your face. Pieces Candles
Grandpa	Voice is better, but you still sound Irish.  Watch squeaking Prepare Worst Barber Moe Debt Two people
Fanny	Louder, show emotion, use the NY accent.  Too Texan right now. \summer Sidney Even month Her Exposure – sounds British likes
Irene	Better accent. Need to be louder. Security – I think air
Miss Fowler	LOUDER!   NY accent needs to be stronger
Rosman	Cross as dancers cross to center. About Stocks Guilty Could You Hit consonants.
Lee	think
Moe	Gallantry Around climb
Miss Graham	Pardon Chicago Well now
Everyone	On Sunday we will start with page 18, Scene 10 then go back to the beginning without scripts. No one begins a relationship during this play. No one breaks up during the play. Scene 5 Shabby - Carson, Michelle, Allison Scene 8 Shabby – Lawrence Hit consonants – If you have read this far, text me – as your character – who does he/she like best.(this person does not have to be in New York) If you are a crew person/alternate, give me one suggestion. This is for a test grade.
Props needed Changes needed	2 pallets Purse for Rose Modern signs Add to Fidgety Feet Song 4 needs to be longer.